En! En En En!!! Francel isn't a character I'm super familiar with, but even so I've really enjoyed the threads we've had so far. The first one was completely ridiculous, but even in the middle of Francel being the butt of the joke, I feel like you still kept his character in mind. It wasn't just about him being embarrassed and so on; he had his own mindset about how he viewed things, about how he argued them, and it shaped the flow of the overall interaction in a very palpable way.
And in our current one, I want to say that tag where Francel described what he saw during the static was a complete goddamn joy to read. When characters retell long things like that, it can be difficult sometimes to keep their voice in it clearly, but there was a whole natural, personal flow to it. Like I said I don't know Francel well directly, but even so, there was a very clear, character-distinct tone to it all. There was something very narrative to it, with natural transitions as he went on and with his asides, and the emotion in it was apparent and really well conveyed. TL;DR I was impressed!
And I also want to say after your own reply to my comment here that I'm really grateful you gave Davesprite a chance despite your misgivings about the canon! I've played from Homestuck for years, so I know people can be very eh about it (definitely with good reason), so I always appreciate this kind of thing. Especially since it's made for the CR it has. I'm looking forward to more in the future!
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And in our current one, I want to say that tag where Francel described what he saw during the static was a complete goddamn joy to read. When characters retell long things like that, it can be difficult sometimes to keep their voice in it clearly, but there was a whole natural, personal flow to it. Like I said I don't know Francel well directly, but even so, there was a very clear, character-distinct tone to it all. There was something very narrative to it, with natural transitions as he went on and with his asides, and the emotion in it was apparent and really well conveyed. TL;DR I was impressed!
And I also want to say after your own reply to my comment here that I'm really grateful you gave Davesprite a chance despite your misgivings about the canon! I've played from Homestuck for years, so I know people can be very eh about it (definitely with good reason), so I always appreciate this kind of thing. Especially since it's made for the CR it has. I'm looking forward to more in the future!